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What I find helps when rp'ing. March 11, 2013, 09:26:pm

Now this is really a journal entry for my fellow writers in Vampire_Kingdom and any of our members that might just chance upon my profile, so my apologies for those of you expecting my usual dark and dreary poetry! You know, when I was first starting off in Vk I didn’t really have a lot of help or support, in fact if I remember correctly my dear friend MYOBB almost pissed me off enough in my first two days to the point of quitting when he deleted all the posts I’d made due to my royal at the time having failed to stick in my user title! To think I’d almost forgone sticking with the cult altogether just because of that! Thankfully I didn’t however and three or mayhaps four years later I’m still around and rocking my main character Daemon Van Malokai!

It feels a bit odd to say that now and I’ve no idea why I’ve really stayed for so long but I suppose somewhere along the line I grew attached to the place and the stories I created there and the friends I made. Anyhow, I’m getting off the point which is “what helps me while rp’ing”. Well I suppose when I’m writing with a partner I make a habit of opening a Microsoft word document and matching their posts in equal length if not more and it also helps due to word’s spelling and grammar check. Another useful tool for me as a writer is the thesaurus which you can call up by highlighting a word and pressing the shift key + f7. This is especially use if you’re stuck while writing and you’re trying to think of a similar term for the word and it’s pissing you off to no end! We’ve all been there right? Another good tip is to recount what your character looks like in detail when rp’ing, don’t just always call him/her by name because it gets repetitive when you’re writing.

Observe,
Daemon, the wraith, the deathly pale male, the hallow-eyed male, the towering porcelain figure, the serpentine male, the predator, the dark prince, the dark-haired male, the Monarch, the sovereign, the 5th imperial seat of the vampyric inquisition, the bloodied warrior! There’s hundreds of titles and combinations that will serve when referring to your character in rp or in writing in general so why stick with a select few? You can refer to your character through his occupation, race, nationality, hair colour, eye colour, the complexion of his skin, anything really once you have a picture of them in your head. Another good tip if you’re writing in a thread is to look to the image depicting the scene and if there isn’t one, find one! Research images on Google if you’re having trouble imaging it on your own; the same idea can be applied to what your character is wearing or the weapon their wielding, the magic their using, the creatures they’re fighting, the fields they’re walking through or the bloody roof they’re sleeping under. If you can’t think of it, GOOGLE IT! Probably not the best motto to be declaring but it’s the truth of it.

In short, nothing can help a writer more than having an image to work off, oft times I find music can help when trying to fill your characters words with emotion, the thesaurus is an excellent tool along with Microsoft Word’s spelling and grammar check and that’s about the high and low of it. I won’t be able to fit all of my writing tips into one journal entry but this was a good start I suppose.

Feel like sharing your own writing tips? Hell, go write on ahead and post them here!


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A Compact Lighter November 20, 2012, 07:10:pm

Late at night and I find myself sitting whimsically,
Unsteady and thinking of bleak premonitions
Whilst establishing the place of a dodgy compact lighter,
A fighter to no addiction, an inebriated contradiction as it were in fact.

I’ve knowingly placed that cancerous stick between my lips, a half thousand times,
A half minute’s pick at my life for a momentary respite,
So lightheaded he frightened me almost as he appeared in my midst.

Blonde hair with a lopsided cap, a pale complexion happened stance,
With blue eyes that entranced the same as dancing heaving hips;
And a right twit I must have been to miss him surely.

Unsteadily he established the mechanism of my lighter,
A fighter to none of my talk, neither balking nor walking away.
We talked for a while, I listened, he smiled, I joked, he laughed,
Relaxing and drawing closer, growing bolder and exploring me with his eyes.

I hold that gaze, the laughing stops,
A predator’s continence with my conscience cornered
And hands clawing into the constricting covers that contain his skin.
I draw him in, he’s quite for a while and then moaning half-hearted protests,
Of waiting for consent, whilst bent into the slope of my abdomen.

Of harm, there was none and when I was done I set my pretty bird loose,
Askew to the idea that I’d regret my actions come morning.
Mockingly roaring, we swap numbers as music comes pouring from the door,
Screens illuminating polar opposite expressions of calm and furrowed brow.
My frown hidden, unbidden I say we’ll hang again and I’m lying already,
Walking steadily home.

Unknowingly I stared at a smile frozen in text,
Derogative apologies hanging in my head
Astonishingly far longer than those I’d forgotten.
Begotten, I shut the humming bird out of mind,

Cruel as it were I was being kind.






-sigh..-

The vast majority of my Friday nights in a nutshell.
Is it wrong to brush someone off, knowingly aware that you're to different and the attraction is off't times only one sided? I've been hitting the night clubs out of boredom for the last year and yet to find someone that fills my shortcomings. Am I too picky? Mayhaps, but that's never stopped me looking high and low for the right person. Better no relationships than a broken one.
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Friends in odd places November 20, 2012, 04:20:pm

I really need to stop typing away on my laptop until two in the morning; technology as wonderful as it can be is slowly taking over the rejuvenation period of my sleep. Heh, I’m making it sound like it’s the first time that’s happened, allowing the pretences of the stereo typical analytical male to emerge in my thoughts when really I’m about as bad at dozing off as I’ve been since the age of fifteen, typing away on my crappy little cinder block of a nokia mobile in the late hours of the night.

I had an odd dream after the five hour period of slumber I like to call my “power nap” whenst having dozed off for a second time successive to my alarm having triggered at 7am. I hate that bloodied thing, it sounds like a siren and I always imagine it’s an ambulance when I’m fantasizing subconsciously. Anyhow, I can’t remember exactly where it started but I’d just entered the downstairs kitchen in my family home to find my friend Laura being threatened by someone. Picking up a knife from beside the breadboard, I brandished it with two hands, pointing it at his face as I stepped between them and then he was gone. When I say gone, my memory of what happened next is absent but he was no longer there and neither was Laura. It continued in irregular intervals of time, one minute I’d be feeling a pang of anxiety and then fear so I presume I confronted him on more than once occasion.

When I woke, my heart was beating erratically and my right cheek was damp, though I believe that was a lapse of saliva, seeing as I rest with my face towards the door. I’m not even going to begin to try and dissect its meaning but I’m less than enthusiastic to experience it again. I’d rather be tripping over the bloody curb again..

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Sweet Dreams Child November 19, 2012, 05:19:pm



Faceless he stumbled once but only once, a front to his traceless frame of past disdain
And decadence unto my being, of which there was no shroud of doubt in mind.
Morality lost, he stumbled hither with black frost creeping through the sole of my padded shoe
With each hush’th fall of limb on hoary stone, and boneless they seemed, curving like dockyard coils
Around the ankle of my motionless bracket.

No thoughts did I feed in fleeting cognizance to a subliminal conscious, inept to all but the blind gaze
Of a façade of flesh, rupturing into a gaping orifice that flooded with a dark ink so foul.
Scent rose shadowed with a copper tang, and blue lips impartial to a cold caress
Were painted with bands of an intangible red.

Abreast I was layn bare on hoary stone, faceless, traceless, doubtless and done..




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Why did I even... November 18, 2012, 05:28:pm
I’m tired, I just want to sleep. It’s been a while since I’ve been able to sleep properly, lace my head with the cotton of my pillow and drift off into a state of sub-consciousness whilst being fully aware that I’m doing so. What did I even dream about last night? I was on my phone until about two o’clock in the morning but it might as well have been four in the evening for all the difference I could make of it at this time of the year. I can only remember vague images of walking on a footpath and then tripping over the curb before I woke up suddenly with a start. That lasted about five seconds or so. Thank you brain, that is exactly the kind of rest I needed, one twelfth of a fucking minute, cheers.

It’s getting dark fairly quickly around my area, nothing strange about that. It always happens around this time, come late November, but the nights are getting colder and each day that draws closer to winter solstice fucks with my head a little more. As for why, I couldn’t even begin to imagine; maybe it’s just my drinking habits over the weekends, I really need to stop touching alcohol, I’m starting to see it’s fucking with me in more ways than one. Last week my little Sister had to see me with my face in a bucket when I was supposed to be looking after my little siblings whilst the parents were away. Apparently I told her I was sorry she had to see me that way and she replied “I actually don’t even care anymore.” Fifteen years old and here’s the example I’m setting. Class A job mate, what a fucking hero you are. I can’t even remember the last time she laughed at one of my jokes, I’m lucky if I get a tired sigh these days, “Why don’t Monkeys play cards in the Jungle? Because there’s too many.. cheat-ahs..” Now who could sigh at that!? It’s so bad it’s funny, HAH! Heh.. Hmm..

Ohh well it isn't all bad I suppose.. I do brotherly stuff, make the tea, do the general tidy up, cook up crappy unimaginative dinners but hey, I make a fierce spaghetti bolognaise, sliced onion, mixed herbs, hot spices, garlic bread and all that awesome shit. Anyhow, I’m not really sure why I wrote all this down. I tried making Poetry earlier and got reminded that I’m in fact quite shite at it at this grey stage in my life, so I started writing down my thoughts which in itself turned into a rant/self-criticism.

Welcome to the inside of my head I suppose.

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