Jan 03, 2018, 11:24pm
Check out this short horror film I made.
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It's a throwback to old school horror, beginning slow but escalated to a gore show.
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Jan 04, 2018, 11:38pm

Holy crap!
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Jan 20, 2018, 08:35pm

Love it!
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Mar 05, 2018, 06:13pm

Its OK for a student film using amateur actors ( who are terrible). You needed more closeups of the characters when exchanging dialogue. and you should have used a tripod. Shaky camera work is distracting, Changing the chroma of the image does not help set the horror/suspense mood. The sound perspective was off a little and the it sounded dubbed. The script/story was interesting but not clear. Audience will be confused as to who, what, where, and why. A little titty action could have been thrown in there for more shock value and make it more "old school". It is a slightly above average student film. You'll get better as you make more movies. i suggests you watch a lot of films from the '70s and '80s when what we called schlock horror was at its best. Films by Roger Corman and AIP , and films by Troma, were the best of the bunch. If you have Turner Classics Movies as part of your cable service it should be your electronic textbook and film school. If you have any questions or need advice contact me. I'll help you out.
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Mar 14, 2018, 07:39pm

that was the worst piece of shit ive ever seen i hope u die
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