I'm not that big of a drum and bass fan but I liked your track, since it's a tad more IDM, which I do like a lot.
I think your sequencing is really good (especially the drums) but the production doesn't hit as hard as it probably should. Try layering your drum sounds with some harder kicks and snares and boost the sub end of your bass a bit.
Btw, the track is good :] I like it a lot.
I do agree with Beta, though; production doesn't hit as hard as it should. Past that though, you've got some talent kid.
